Scott at GO INTO THE STORY replied to a reader question about using the "-ing" version of verbs (present progressive tense). This word form indicates an action is incomplete, ongoing, or will happen in the future.
"James is pummeling the exercise bag with superhuman fury" versus "James pummels the exercise bag with superhuman fury."
http://gointothestory.blcklst.com/2013/08/reader-question-should-i-use-is-construction-verbs-or-not.htmlYou'll see in many of my
10PTTs I flag these and suggest using the plain verb form works as well, with the bonus of saving syllables. Shorter words and sentences lead to quicker mental comprehension -- a quicker, smoother read.
Some sentences do require the present progressive construction for clarity or emphasis. Test your sentences carefully. Sometimes you must explicitly show the action is ongoing. Most times you can jettison the "-ing" without introducing ambiguity.
